First off, let me say I don't like the new layout as opposed to MC. The linear order seems more natural to me rather than the alphabetical used. Even having all Talents by rank is better than alphabetically. I rank 1 first, then all the rank 2, then rank 3, and lastly rank 4 if there is any.
Since you are using alphabetical, things should be as such. I'm only reading on my phone, but right off, I've found one out of order. On page 67, under Athletics, Pugilist comes after Strong Back. Obviously the letter P comes before S.
@BruceBoragine I don't have MC but i did find the alphabetic order somewhat "unnatural" too. Listing the talents by rank would have felt more natural for me, at least that's what i expect based on the talent tree format.
May be the whole list could follow the order of the skills from the character sheet.
The attributes are in an alphabetical order so it would keep some kind of organised fashion, we wouldn't lose the logic.
Page 62 Acrobatics, Healthy Paranoia. "When involved in a struggle to resist being surprised,
you gain 2 bonus Momentum." 2 bonus momentum to what and when? Do you get the momentum before you roll or after a successful roll or after a roll successful or not?
A qualifying phrase should be on the end of the sentence. IE., "you gain 2 bonus Momentum, before you roll to use on the roll. Or, ." "you gain 2 bonus Momentum, only after a successful roll."